Page Title: Gerasene Writer's Conference: The Fox's Confessor: Chapter Four

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Page Text: The Fox's Confessor: Chapter Four Lost in sorrow’s thickets, the cleric missed The coming thunder, steel gnawing down On steel, the grind that crushed and pushed and pressed. And Lytlewood, abject with abstraction, Ignored the nearing lights of the station. In lonely vigil, only Lonnie heard The train approach the town – its combustion Now sweeping like fate’s engine forward toward The platform, a cargo of revelations on board. The gravity and steel strained to a stop Before the platform. Nervous clustered knots Of those awaiting departure took a grip Of bags and baggage, memories and regret – And those awaiting arrival of debt Assumed and endured now scattered to see Before being seen, hoping to forget The argument, the tiff, the row, or free One's conscience from some latest infidelity. Amid the crowded station’s fervid come And go, the thick-chested man rose and reached For baggage overhead. His head went numb And slumped over – until darkness encroached Upon his sight and gravity unstitched His dozing mind in momentary dread. But catching himself, he stood again, latched One hand to bag and one upon his head. His feet felt for the platform with the weight of lead. Through his faintness Lytlewood thought he saw An obese figure make its way from shadows – Waving to him, the man lacked thumbs, his jaw Hung like a dog’s. In clean accounting rows The memories started adding up and rose To meet him – that same fat body hog-tied With phone cord; that same jaw in twisted throes, And thumbs jumping from his hands as the blade Performed precisely: action owed and suffering paid. The moment Lonnie saw old Lytlewood He knew that something about him was wrong. He seemed an apparition as he stood As if about to faint. “It’s been too long, Mr. Lytlewood!” His words seemed to hang Too long before Lytlewood made reply: “You…what? – why you?” “I’m here to help bring Your baggage and things to The Burgundy.” “Lonnie Cash – yes, that’s your name? – I’ve come here to die.” * * * * * * “I shit you not, Peyton, it’s what he said, On God’s honor,” Lonnie explained back at The hotel. “Also, he said he’d be dead In hell, he said, before the night was out.” But Peyton half-listened and, half in doubt, Regarded Lonnie’s news as if received Without the bona fides of proper bullshit. “I think, dear brother, you falsely perceived (Big words always got to Lonnie) and thus believed.” “Well, all’s I know is he don’t look so good; He got these shakes – and driving here I saw These dizzy spells possess him. Lytlewood Ain’t Lytlewood is all’s I’m saying now – He even told me, ‘Take it nice and slow Through downtown’ – which added a whole half-hour Because we drove by this old whorehouse so He could, I don’t know… something to remember, He said, holding hard the while to some kind of folder.” When Lonnie finished Peyton began to hum And think and hum and…. Lonnie blurted, “What!” The office light was shedding from its dome Unsettled shadows on Peyton’s balding nut. He leaned into the cone. “Well look, here’s what I say we do: if Music’s golden goose Is getting ready to kick the bucket – We need some way to find out what that goose Is going to do and whether it’s meant for us.” “Remember that Music demands his men Have to be registered Catholics to play?” Continued Peyton. “He held confession A good way to keep his men honest and fey For blood." “Fey?” “Shut up, Lonnie, and listen – So Music kept on his payroll a real, Honest-to-God priest who heard all the sin And nonsense of Music’s men. Then he’d squeal Afterwards to Music. The trick would never fail.” “What trick?” “Oh, Lonnie, clam it, for Christ’s sakes! The trick was to confess and keep close tabs Ensuring no one came with higher stakes To Music’s table. Nothing up for grabs – You see? You put a fear of God in rubes And they won’t play you for one, or abuse Your confidence. So we find a priest that gabs; We make it so he don't know it, set him loose On old Lytlewood – and if he doesn’t refuse He’ll have to be thinking Music's being thorough – And maybe he’s dying for sure – well, will He refuse a priest? One way or not, we’ll know If Mr. Biggy Lytlewood is ill To death.” “And where’ll I find a priest that will Want to?” Peyton smiled wide. “Well, as I see…. That rummy from St. Placid’s fits the bill – And it so happens that he’s currently Buying up the bar. He goes by Father Andy.” Posted by JOB at

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